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    This Edition's Poetry

    Taking it Personally

    I never took their words personally
    knowing they meant nothing
    which could not be absorbed or shrugged aside
    as here say or typographical heresy

    All that “Write what you know” stuff
    seemed only common sense
    for how can anyone ever create a single line
    from anything other than personal experience?

    & yet, here’s the rub ~ only the words themselves
    mean anything to me
    not the perfect bliss they once described
    syllabic buzz-blur of a muzzy “I’m yours”
    trapped in transit by a lingering kiss
    or the girl who left or the love which vanished
    like a soft breath in a zephyr-brisk breeze

    I cannot carry such conundrums inside my skull
    only the words necessary to communicate
    some clever measure of pithy wit
    never enough to convey the ream-weight burden
    of narrative interludes disturbed with attitudes
    which perturbate the air of memory
    & bring remorse to that inner discourse of mind

    Otherwise, I might write that which I never meant to say
    & someone else might take those words
    personally ~ making mockery of the times of my life
    finding in them things which mattered
    far more to them than they ever did to me

    by G. Warlock Vance

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    Comments (2)
    • Pamela  - Astutely Stated
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      This poem certainly speaks to those of us who wonder when putting pen to paper just what the reader is reading....is it our actual words and feelings or is it somehow turned about and made their experience? Then again....perhaps that's what makes our pennings meaningful in the first place - the ability to touch people in a way that they really RELATE to our words. Whatever - I like this poem a great deal. :D
    • helen
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      What about it the words are personal??
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